I only had time for the personality section for now so here. Edited spelling and some parts to make it flow better.
Character Personality: In order to describe Anise, one first has to explain her history and the many layers she has.
Cute, mischievous, and cruel are all words used to describe Anise. While she is energetic and eccentric, she uses that to her advantage to make people believe that she is a normal girl. She is anything but. Since she came from a poor family, she grew up in a harsh environment. Her family kept getting into money problems so she had to work for Mohs to pay it off. Since then, she has been living a double life to help her parents. Due to this, she is extremely bright and responsible for a girl her age. She knew how to cook, clean, work, sew, and even kill due to her ability as a fighter. At the age of eleven, with enough studying and practice of her artes, she managed to become a fon master guardian. She already knew the troubles of doing the job since many others picked on her due to her age. She never trusted people because she believed that everyone was out to get one another. She was harsh and cruel to people because they deserved it. It was a way to protect herself. Despite this cynical view, she developed a fake surface. She pretends to have an innocent and cheerful nature. She would much rather be viewed as a 'gold digger' then to let other knows she was lying this whole time. It could be said that because she trusted no one, Ion was her first friend. While she befriended Dist and Jade, she was never fully comfortable with them.
Despite her cold view on humanity, Anise cannot stand injustice. If there is someone in trouble, she will help them. While she does try to figure out ways to get rich, she only does it her for parents. When it's clear that someone is doing it for selfish reasons, she will make them pay. Adding to that, while Anise does have a horrible temper, she wants to be seen as an adult. She is responsible and is capable of being calm in most situations. When others were picking on her, she didn't report it to Ion because of those reasons. She wanted people to take her seriously as a guardian. The quickest way to anger her is to insult her parents (and her friends later on). In a way, she is extremely loyal. She feels indebted to them and will do anything to protect them.
Between her time as a fon master guardian and before meeting Luke, Anise remained the same. She was still teasing people, trying to marry into the rich, cursing like a sailor, and still had a hard time trusting in people.
With that said, "her journey with the others was ability to see the good in people" (okay this part I couldn't edit since I honestly couldn't figure out what you were getting at so you might wanna fix it). Even after Luke had changed, she was still unsure about everything. She was always the first person to distrust anyone who was a traitor no matter what good they did, she was always the first to make harsh comments to those same people, and she was the last person to believe that people could live without the Score.
It was after Ion's death that she changed. When her friends found out about her double life, she had nothing to hide anymore. She believed that there is good in some people because, even though she killed someone, they forgave her. They were even willing to fight by her side when she challenged Arietta to a duel. It was also because of Ion's death that had made her want to believe that people can change for the better good. In order to do that, she had to change herself. While she does love to tease people, she wasn't going to hide anything anymore. She promised herself to live an honest life by giving up money and becoming the first female fon master. That meant that she had to do things the hard way but it would be worth it.
Overall, despite how mature Anise is, she is still a little girl. She is cynical but she is slowly starting to see that people can change no matter what. Yes, she is cute but one should not underestimate how tough this girl can be. She is a jerk but at least she's a jerk with a heart of gold. Also, she loves to troll people so watch out.
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Character Personality: In order to describe Anise, one first has to explain her history and the many layers she has.
Cute, mischievous, and cruel are all words used to describe Anise. While she is energetic and eccentric, she uses that to her advantage to make people believe that she is a normal girl. She is anything but. Since she came from a poor family, she grew up in a harsh environment. Her family kept getting into money problems so she had to work for Mohs to pay it off. Since then, she has been living a double life to help her parents. Due to this, she is extremely bright and responsible for a girl her age. She knew how to cook, clean, work, sew, and even kill due to her ability as a fighter. At the age of eleven, with enough studying and practice of her artes, she managed to become a fon master guardian. She already knew the troubles of doing the job since many others picked on her due to her age. She never trusted people because she believed that everyone was out to get one another. She was harsh and cruel to people because they deserved it. It was a way to protect herself. Despite this cynical view, she developed a fake surface. She pretends to have an innocent and cheerful nature. She would much rather be viewed as a 'gold digger' then to let other knows she was lying this whole time. It could be said that because she trusted no one, Ion was her first friend. While she befriended Dist and Jade, she was never fully comfortable with them.
Despite her cold view on humanity, Anise cannot stand injustice. If there is someone in trouble, she will help them. While she does try to figure out ways to get rich, she only does it her for parents. When it's clear that someone is doing it for selfish reasons, she will make them pay. Adding to that, while Anise does have a horrible temper, she wants to be seen as an adult. She is responsible and is capable of being calm in most situations. When others were picking on her, she didn't report it to Ion because of those reasons. She wanted people to take her seriously as a guardian. The quickest way to anger her is to insult her parents (and her friends later on). In a way, she is extremely loyal. She feels indebted to them and will do anything to protect them.
Between her time as a fon master guardian and before meeting Luke, Anise remained the same. She was still teasing people, trying to marry into the rich, cursing like a sailor, and still had a hard time trusting in people.
With that said, "her journey with the others was ability to see the good in people" (okay this part I couldn't edit since I honestly couldn't figure out what you were getting at so you might wanna fix it). Even after Luke had changed, she was still unsure about everything. She was always the first person to distrust anyone who was a traitor no matter what good they did, she was always the first to make harsh comments to those same people, and she was the last person to believe that people could live without the Score.
It was after Ion's death that she changed. When her friends found out about her double life, she had nothing to hide anymore. She believed that there is good in some people because, even though she killed someone, they forgave her. They were even willing to fight by her side when she challenged Arietta to a duel. It was also because of Ion's death that had made her want to believe that people can change for the better good. In order to do that, she had to change herself. While she does love to tease people, she wasn't going to hide anything anymore. She promised herself to live an honest life by giving up money and becoming the first female fon master. That meant that she had to do things the hard way but it would be worth it.
Overall, despite how mature Anise is, she is still a little girl. She is cynical but she is slowly starting to see that people can change no matter what. Yes, she is cute but one should not underestimate how tough this girl can be. She is a jerk but at least she's a jerk with a heart of gold. Also, she loves to troll people so watch out.